Wow. i felt this way before. i thought it was great, honesty was the way to go. 5/5

I usually don't read love poetry, but I really like this one, cause I can relate to the feelings that you're describing.
Good job, 5/5.

Great job.. the simplicity and the emotions were great although the ending just suddenly went off a bit. but anyway, still like this one..Keep it up

I love this one ur a great writer