I can relate to this. It's full of emotions and very well written. |
This poem was deep but yet very well done!!!The flow seems flawless and each stanza went really good. |
by ShadyPyro
This Poem Was DEEP...Actually....I Can Relate To It..5/5 Most Deff |
by Debbie
This is truly a poem of great potent, although it conveyed rage within the subject. It sort of have blown me away with its venting expressions - relatively powerful. Your rage and/or irritation is evident throughout. And I think you've presented this well rather superbly. Well done. 5/5 ~Marian |
I can really relate to this, i mean its very well put together.And the words have so much meaning to them and the poem has a nice flow and it was a great read, 5/5 |
by RetroRavey
That was pretty good. I've never read anything quite like it, but I like the feelin and emotion behind it. Good job. 5/5 |
by Good Enough
Good poem keep up the good work... oh and ill listen to you if you want.. |
by Tricky Daze
I liked the wording usage and the topic...But I will suggest you to be careful about punctuation |
by Mel
Very sad. good emotion for sure. i loved the line..."especailly this warn out frown." good imagery. |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Wow. This poem was short, but was packed in with so much anger. I hope this isn't how you feel because it's Hell when you hurt, and no one truly cares enough. |
by Corruption
Wonderful poem i like this one better then the one just read even though that one was awesome too but the last line of this poem really got it i loved that line good job and thx for the other commnet lol:):) |