Great poem..simple yet effect at tahe same time
neevr stop writing
bree x

Awww... my beautiful Jess
I loved it! You wrote about something real I loved your description of everything!
I loved your poem and I love you ! 5/5!

"Wasting away
Underneath what the media portrays
Hidden away from reality
This isn't real"

Thats it. Your getting a "Vannessa Comment"
Bottomless pocket. You are not ceasing my amazement! You are effing brilliant.
:)))))))

Im not totally sure what this is about...
but even so, the wording and intenseness like forced emotion on me.
good job.