Sweet. It had a very good story in it, also nicely written, and had a good ending. Nice job.

Gorgeous. I loved the flow and the story. "Broken Flowers" such an amazing picture. I love this poem! Its perfect!

~Morgan~

Liked the ryhme scheme that was put into this definitly well thoughout and effective. The title was interesting I belive you got it from entering a contest? I think you picked the right title as you did a great job. Well done yet again nice work ~mel

How sweet, the lasst stanza was the cutest ^^!! I think (even though this is meant to be a sad poem), it was a sweet poem. For some reason the idea of staying for a loved one and holding broken flowers has this warm feeling. Call me wierd, but I think it was a wonderful scenario. Especially to write such a scenario...d.a.r.n. you're one lucky writer =)....neh, you're just gifted =)

Bryan
This piece is really beautiful yet so sad. I guess in love thats how it goes. Imagery and word choices were great.

Excellent!
Take care Cindy

As always your poems are amazing! :D Flow was flawless! Well penned! keep writing! :)

I really like these two lines

She has had enough, so she goes to pack her things
only leaving a note, laying under her wedding ring

When I was through reading this piece, I writhed in disdain. It was actually bitter and sweet at the same time. Love indeed cannot live without trust...

Nicely done, as always. =] ~Marian