by Sweet Fragility Jun 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
The time we spend together, you always try to hurt me. |
by Polaroid
Love your poems they flow so nicley, and i was hoping that you could find it in your time to vote and comment on some of my poems, it would be greatly appreciated |
Great write, Formed poetry is hard to write sometimes, you made it seem effortless. |
This is beautifully written! You pulled off a hard form of poetry with elegance and seeming ease. The rhymes were ace, vocab was ace, and you portrayed such strong, heartfelt emotions. Truly excellent work. I loved every word of it! |
This triple Triolet is very well written in a heartfelt theme |
by GoodMEMORIES
Great emotiona and depth... |