All My Heart [Triple Triolet]

by Sweet Fragility   Jun 24, 2007


The time we spend together, you always try to hurt me.
I cannot believe that it makes me want to die.
If you knew - would you be filled with malicious glee?
The time we spend together, you always try to hurt me.
I have always been so strong, everyone would agree.
People think I am heartless - do I still remember how to cry?
The time we spend together, you always try to hurt me.
I cannot believe that it makes me want to die.

My heart breaks a little more each passing day.
It burns inside when you are thinking of her instead of me.
These are the emotions I cannot let myself display.
My heart breaks a little more each passing day.
She is the only one you care about, so why can't I stay away?
You use me and cast me away like a piece of debris.
My heart breaks a little more each passing day.
It burns inside when you are thinking of her instead of me.

You don't know that I love you with all my heart.
I wish I could tell you that I am able to feel.
How do you not know, you're supposed to be smart.
You don't know that I love you with all my heart.
Everyday I hide the fact that I am falling apart.
The thought of telling you makes my head reel.
You don't know that I love you with all my heart.
I wish I could tell you that I am able to feel.

A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines.

Copyright (c) Sweet Fragility
6/24/07

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  • 17 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Love your poems they flow so nicley, and i was hoping that you could find it in your time to vote and comment on some of my poems, it would be greatly appreciated
    thank you.. all the best, the lady of the silver valley

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Great write, Formed poetry is hard to write sometimes, you made it seem effortless.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    This is beautifully written! You pulled off a hard form of poetry with elegance and seeming ease. The rhymes were ace, vocab was ace, and you portrayed such strong, heartfelt emotions. Truly excellent work. I loved every word of it!

    Write On!
    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This triple Triolet is very well written in a heartfelt theme

  • 17 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    Great emotiona and depth...
    keep it up