I also really loved this poem when I read it, sad but so real...how a person can love someone who hurts them so much and not know how to pull themselves away from them..that, in this poem, is a very relateable part. I absolutely loved your ability to make it so personal but so easy to relate to as well. Great job.

"I have always been so strong, everyone would agree.
People think I am heartless - do I still remember how to cry?"

^^ My favorite lines, they really stood out to me.

5.5
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Wow it takes great skill and time to write one of theese well done its is worded excelently 5/5

I frikken LOVE this.
The depth and emotion you put into this are amazing, imagery was beautifully done, and the fact that it was a triolet was an added bonus for me =)

Great emotiona and depth...
keep it up

This triple Triolet is very well written in a heartfelt theme

This is beautifully written! You pulled off a hard form of poetry with elegance and seeming ease. The rhymes were ace, vocab was ace, and you portrayed such strong, heartfelt emotions. Truly excellent work. I loved every word of it!

Write On!
Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Great write, Formed poetry is hard to write sometimes, you made it seem effortless.

Peace, Joe

Love your poems they flow so nicley, and i was hoping that you could find it in your time to vote and comment on some of my poems, it would be greatly appreciated
thank you.. all the best, the lady of the silver valley