by xXits meXx Jun 24, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
&& im hiding behind this smile |
I thought the ending was very good intercepting with the idea of the broken mirror.But one thing was that your rhyming was scattered, in some places and not otheres and more than 2 lines like you started off the poem with.But still a good poem, 5/5 |
by xXits meXx
Lol thanx!!! |
This Was So Good..I'm Saddened That Its So Short Because I'm Greedy For Good Poetry 5/5 Anyway Hun!! |