by Sweet Fragility Jun 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
When you look into my blue eyes |
by lish
U are definately a gifted poet well done this poem is amazing |
I love this. Very impressive for your first Kyrielle; one thing I though could have been improved in this piece was the grammar..each line ended with a period when some could have ended with a comma, improving the flow a bit...other than that, it was flawless ! |
Excellent poem, It was so amazing, I loved it, I'm not quite familar with this type of writting but it looks intreasting to try. Anyway, Good job, It was quite a good read... |
by Michelle18
Oops ^^double post..sorry |
by Michelle18
Great poem...very interesting style.....even though im not familiar with this type of poetry, i thought it sounded wonderful... it flowed great. .. |