This poem was really good.How well you have written this!!!You really made it clear in this poem!!!!Good job!!!
Once again you have written another superb poem!!!!
All the best
And take care

Thats was an osm write i really like this one passion hard work and feeling was put in this one and truly paid off great job!!!! 5/5

laura

Well done, i dont particularly enjoy this style but it worked so well with this poem and i enjoyed reading it.
well done again.
love Tara-Kay
xxx

Very well done indeed, its very nice

the repiton of the last line was good

my favorite parts was

"I know you'll never say goodbye.
Sing with me the song of the stars."

i just love, the first stanza was my favorite

5/5

This is amazing. It isn't pathetic at all. I like the repetition of this greatly written line:Sing with me the song of the stars.
Every stanza is great I like it very much. Keep up( I'll read more of your poems)
Good wording created excellent atmosphere in this peace. 5/5

Beautifully written poem, very emotional and descriptive. The imagery in it is truly captivating.
Well done, I enjoyed in this piece very much.
5/5

A very beautiful and sweet poem. The word choice was great and the emotion was wonderful. I gave it a 5/5.

Your poems are beautifull and your talented. you are are ahmazing writter! KEEP IT UP!

I think this is your best poem I've read :) The flow was flawless. The opening stanza really grabs the readers attention, well done

Words gently murmured in my ear.
Reminder of your affection.
Rush of ecstasy when you're here.
Sing with me the song of the stars.
^^ I really love that stanza. Fantastic work.

5/5!

When you look into my blue eyes
I can see the burning passion.
I know you'll never say goodbye.
Sing with me the song of the stars.

Words gently murmured in my ear.
Reminder of your affection.
Rush of ecstasy when you're here.
Sing with me the song of the stars.

The sweet taste of your soothing kiss.
I wish for this to never end.
Your presence would be truly missed.
Sing with me the song of the stars.

I've never sang this song before.
Never felt the way I do now.
You're the only one I live for.
Sing with me the song of the stars.

These were my fav lines in poem (lol)
It was really awesome cos you took care the poetry also

Keep trying such nw things
YOur friend
Rohan
5/5

I also really enjoyed this poem! the emotion is so great..a lovely write. =]

Great poem...very interesting style.....even though im not familiar with this type of poetry, i thought it sounded wonderful... it flowed great. ..

i really like this one.

another job well done...5/5 from me.. keep it up!

Great poem...very interesting style.....even though im not familiar with this type of poetry, i thought it sounded wonderful... it flowed great. ..

i really like this one.

another job well done...5/5 from me.. keep it up!

Oops ^^double post..sorry

Excellent poem, It was so amazing, I loved it, I'm not quite familar with this type of writting but it looks intreasting to try. Anyway, Good job, It was quite a good read...

OVerall 5/5

I love this. Very impressive for your first Kyrielle; one thing I though could have been improved in this piece was the grammar..each line ended with a period when some could have ended with a comma, improving the flow a bit...other than that, it was flawless !

"You're the only one I live for.
Sing with me the song of the stars."

^^ LOVED those lines !

5.5
:]

U are definately a gifted poet well done this poem is amazing
xx