Good poem very well written you did a good job im glad i read it

keenan

I liked it a lot...well done....check out some of my poems rate them or comment please...it will help me a lot....

Well written..and even better than the first part.

good job! 5/5

Beautiful! i love the last stanza. Keep it up your very talented

I didnt realise that this was the second part, when you entered it into the august contest at PFP.
But you got third place for this wonderful, well written piece. It flowed so well and was inspirational and i loved the wording
love always,
Tara-Kay
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Great poem it hit real close to home i like it alot because its cryptic meaning was cloaked very well thank you for writing this poem it has inspired me

5/5 Very well done. =]