Awwww, Nathan! I love this one!! Such a change from the sad ones...I'm so glad you had a great day!!

Very nice and beautiful poem good work keep it up 5/5
i'll appreciate your comment and voting for my poems
hani

I love it!
it sounded so good
Very nice work.
Keep writing.
you have a talent for it and dont let anyone tell you otherwise..
Love ya
XOXO
Chelsey

This is great I loved it I have actually had it happen so yeah:) Keep up on the writting

Simple, but very very good. Keep it up, you got some really good poems.

Awww so sweet very strong passion
written well
laura