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by Poetic Tragedy08 Jun 24, 2007 category : Love, romance / desired love
Here we are again Waiting for no one but us We stand side by side Words are our unspoken fuss I try to tell you secretly What is ripping me inside But nothing changes between And my feelings continue to hide Once again, I stand alone Just like a rock at the side of the ocean It's hard to know what to do or say As my heart is being drowned with emotion Just help my lungs recieve breath Help my heart beat just once I just want to see your beauty I just want to be with you
by Nix
I don't like the last line but rest of this poem is superb. Imagery is great and you described emotions excellently. 5/5
by bacha
Iloved it for sure:):):) keep it up:):) khuloodan:):)) smile all the time:))