"But you can survive in this World if you know which road to take
And it only matters on the choices you make."

Its pretty scary just how dependant our lives are on the decisions we make in life. They make all the difference in the end. In the end, whatever path we take, wherever we end up down the track is because of the choices we made. Our futures lie in our own hands. This was a truthful poem.

Take Care:)

I totally agree w/ you when you say the world is filled w/ hate anyways the poem was good

Creative, interesting, it held my interest throughout the poem. I love your rhyme scheme! Keep writing!

Creative, interesting, it held my interest throughout the poem. I love your rhyme scheme! Keep writing!

Creative, interesting, it held my interest throughout the poem. I love your rhyme scheme! Keep writing!

“most of the people here are lazy”
I couldn’t agree more with you on this. This is just the bitter truth.
it's more than good seeing people thinking about life. Most are too lazy to think about such things.

Marjan :)