The thing i liked about this poem is the happiness that remains from the start till the end. Lovely poem, my friend :)

Keep on writing !

Very nice write Shy, i'm glad that you learning to cope with this. Hang in there girly!

Luv ya,
Alicia

Wow, im so sorry for your loss I cant say i know how you feel because I havent been through it, but this is a lovely poem.. nice job! check out some of mine, thanx.5/5

I lost a friend of mine who was like a sister to me except she killed herself. If you want to talk you can talk to me I'll listen. Great job on this poem. 5/5