I Like it alot!
I like how you did something differnt...
a pillow? GooD!

Two Words...Speech-less....lol it was awesome

sincerely yours,
uwouldntno

Very truthful i really like this one 5/5 like it alot very powerful
laura

I really love this lines. ^^
"I'd be there for the pillow fights,
and even there when you're alone.
I would ease all your neck pain,
I know I'd be the Best Pillow."
Very very beautiful poem... ^^
I'm the 2nd voter and I give you 5/5, I don't know the 1st voter who give you 4/5. But I think it's really excellent..^^

I am in awe...this poem really speaks to me. Such love and passion you have put into your poetry, it reminds me of my earlier times when i had the urge to write. Now i am in a state of writers block. I am glad to see that you are not. Your poetry speaks more than any thing you could say in person...your writings show your world. That i love. Your word choice is immpecable, and your grammar is grand. The message it sends out is amazing. I must say that you are a breath of fresh air. Keep on writing and you will go far. I shall give you a rare 5/5 for this one...

-sabree

P.S- IS there a certain boy this is for? If it is...then he is very lucky. Always keep your loved ones in mind when writing poetry. Many of mine are of ex girlfriends and boyfriends.

Aww.. this is a 'cute' poem.. (if you don't take offence at that).. I tried the 'pillow' line in one or two of mine.. I now feel very inadequate!! lol.. Well done.. xx

S - You could be my pillow ;)
But in all seriousness, i love this piece :)
Very poetic, cute, real.. I especially love the lines
If only I could be your pillow,
here to catch your falling tears...
There when you are scared to death
just hold on tight
I'll fight your fears...

This made me tear up a little. Wanting to take someone's pain away.. Its something we all want to do for those we love..