by Stephanie Naylor Jun 25, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
You took my heart |
This was an okay poem. the flow could have been better. and maybe a little longer.. besides that i can feel the heartfelt words u put into this. good job.. a rate this a 3 |
by ash
This is very good |
Wow this is really sad, but it's a great poem 5/5 |
That was well written. |
I liked it and i can relate...except the child part...but i sure did think i was pregnant for a lil sec. but this was a powerful poem and i hope its not true. |