Comments : Defeat

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this poem is so honestly written and filled with emotions. Great piece.
    My favorite lines are:
    -I'm in my room with new scars,
    freshly made, knife in so far,
    the sinful water escaping my dreams,
    all this pain washed away it seems-
    You write really good poetry.
    5/5