by ImNotPerfect20 Jun 25, 2007
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
You helped me though some hard times |
by Sumit Ojha
Nice poem... Good choice of words... |
by GoodMEMORIES
This is sad but yet amazing. |
by ECILA ice
This was a lovely sweet poem and such you're such a good sweet friend to dedicate a poem for him.. well i honestly love this one, simple yeah but i like to keep it that way.. but the problem here is the flow it went a little off... |
by JaMeS
Good flow to it sorry someone had to leave your life in order for it to be written |
by Melpomene
This was quite a beautifully piece I must say. The dedication at the bottom let me know how real this poem was to you showing me how much of an emotion packed work this truely is. I belived this was inspiring and heartfelt leaving the reader with the emotions you feel when writing this. Although the flow seemed to stuggle in some places the meaning you portrayed behind this was gorgeous. Well done ~mel |