Solace: Within his arms. (Senryu)

by Crystal Gaze   Jun 25, 2007


Tear's fall from my eyes.
Your arms wrap around me tight.
Within, hurt flees.Relief!

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I love writing Senryu poetry. It's a short verse that can hold so much meaning.
In this case, this poem is about my boyfriend. I decided to put one of many poems I have written about him on here. I hope you enjoyed it.

I love you Jake.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I love senryu's too. And i loved this one, so sweet, so sad too. a good wrote
    well done
    love Tara-kay
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    Awww.. that is so sweet that you made this poem for Jake, Elaine =) He has no idea how lucky he is to have you!

    Even though this piece is short, I can still relate to it... You're hurt and crying, and your loved one just doing something simple like wrapping their arms around you makes everything feel okay again.

    5/5 Girl, keep it up! <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Very interesting. It isn't your best poem but it has great imagery. Wording is simple but you created atmosphere with just a few words which is incredible. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    A beautiful and so very heartfelt love poem. Once more, this piece was dripping with emotions that you truely felt. Once more, you've written an amazing piece

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    It was perfect :-) i really like it a lot, 5/5 keep it up

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