In my little corner

by The Lonely Rose   Jun 25, 2007


In my room,
In my little corner,
I think,
I think and reflect of how alone I must be,
When no one is there,
No one is there to lend a shoulder,
While I cry those endless nights,

Will anyone see,
How I really am?
Of how the pain I suffer,
Is deep within me?

No smile will creep on my face,
When the sun dies,
By the nights darkness,
When the Moon opens the darkness of my mind.

When I try to open up,
They try to push away,
And leave me be,
Oh, How alone should I be?

So nobody will know,
Nobody will care.
Too late to open up,
Too late for people to care
Just stuck in my room..
In my little corner..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Amber Dawn

    Hey chica!! it was really good you have come an amazingly long way then what you first started!!! keep up the good work
    **showers you with stars**
    Keep up the good work
    Love ya bunches
    *~Amber Dawn~*

  • 17 years ago

    by Yazdan

    Woops, i forgot to actualy comment on the poem :P. It was so good i started getting distracted. Sorry. Its amazing, simple, effective and touching. Excellent flow, good word usage, just overall amazing. Great job. A piece of art to be proud of.

  • 17 years ago

    by Yazdan

    Sad poem, i've been there.

    The best way to resolve all sadness
    To banish the light from you darkened soul
    Is to open the blinds
    And let the light poor through

    Dont keep yourself shut away, alone. IT only makes things worse. You feel alone not because others dislike you, but because you are isolating yourself. Things may be looking down but they will only get worse if you don't be a bit optimistic. I know its not always the easiest thing to do, especialy if you dont have someone to help you through it. Just don't go do something stupid like killing yourself, no matter how alone you feel, there is always someone who cares about you.

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Ok, i thought it was very sad, but a great poem.The only thing was that in this stanza...

    "No smile will creep on my face,
    When the sun dies,
    By the nights darkness,
    When the Moon opens the darkness of my mind."

    you use darkness in both of the last lines

    and again in this stanza...

    So nobody will know,
    "Nobody will care.
    Too late to open up,
    Too late for people to care
    Just stuck in my room..
    In my little corner.."

    you used the word "care" twice and it just seemed a little weird.But still a great write, keep it up, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Ok, i thought it was very sad, but a great poem.The only thing was that in this stanza...

    "No smile will creep on my face,
    When the sun dies,
    By the nights darkness,
    When the Moon opens the darkness of my mind."

    you use darkness in both of the last lines

    and again in this stanza...

    So nobody will know,
    "Nobody will care.
    Too late to open up,
    Too late for people to care
    Just stuck in my room..
    In my little corner.."

    you used the word "care" twice and it just seemed a little weird.But still a great write, keep it up, 5/5

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