Comments : My emptyness

  • 17 years ago

    by Kimatha

    I really like this poem because most people i know left me and i walked alone just as you described in this poem...I'd give a 5.0 (excellent) because it related to me

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW awesome poem, well written and vocabulary was excellent, flow was nice , very good job all in all.
    Everything is empty, and I am so tired. I have no fight, I see no light, I trust in nothing, and there is no hope believing in something.
    Sweetie I been there all my life , it gets better , you'll see. Thanks for sharing , your friend, Tracy d 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Naw this was a wonderful poem. it was trully excellet, you have a way with words.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by xArunaex

    Very deep, I liked the way you describe those emotions. Nicely done, keep it up. Thanks for your comment as well..=)