Good poem. |
Yeah I liked it too, not asmuch as "Boy crazy" but yeah It was good. The 3rd stanza was a bit...hmm...I don't know it didn't quite like my ears..eyes...wtv...but the rest was splendid! :) I liked the word usage and the simple topic which almost everybody has to go through in life. Things you want come whn you don't want it anymore, or just can't have it. I relate =) |