I love your emotion in your poems
great work. 5/5

Great poem.It flowed very well until it came to 'candy' where it got a little choppy.Still a great read though.Keep it up,-Miranda

I have always felt there are two kinds of poems for a poet one for the general public the other for his friends and family that should be in a personal nature I think this poem is the ladder of the two. I liked it as a whole but some poems should be for the eyes of those who really can draw from your emotions Plot121

I enjoyed reading this on and I can relate... I love your work