Wow very descriptive, and deep, nice transition and original 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine. |
Wow, this is a great poem, i really like it. it seems very deep and thoughtful, keep it up! |
by Mommy And Me
This poem also had great description in it. you don't give away the reason you write the poem till near the end. great writing skills. |
Wow, very effective and captivating. Whole poem is so unique and excellently written, every stanza is simply breathtaking. I like the imagery a lot, it's so greatly created. |
Wow!!! really wonderful!!! I love: "The curtains close my eyes" its so descriptive! you can really see the story, and feel the emotions! clearly written by someone who has experienced playing the piano with your soul. Lovely piece! |
by Veamm
Excellent! |
Beautiful. This one is a five. Claps* I did one called the instrument but I don't think it was as good. I don't remember entirely though. Good job though. :) |