Comments : The Piano

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow very descriptive, and deep, nice transition and original 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSilentlyScreamingxx

    Wow, this is a great poem, i really like it. it seems very deep and thoughtful, keep it up!

    Amy x

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    This poem also had great description in it. you don't give away the reason you write the poem till near the end. great writing skills.

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, very effective and captivating. Whole poem is so unique and excellently written, every stanza is simply breathtaking. I like the imagery a lot, it's so greatly created.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -My feet cross the floorboards,
    An even undisturbed dance,
    No voices echo my thoughts,
    As my fingers have one chance,-

    Well done, keep up! 5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    Wow!!! really wonderful!!! I love: "The curtains close my eyes" its so descriptive! you can really see the story, and feel the emotions! clearly written by someone who has experienced playing the piano with your soul. Lovely piece!

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    This one one is truly emotional, you have conveyed your feeling on it! Very inspiring piece!

    Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Beautiful. This one is a five. Claps* I did one called the instrument but I don't think it was as good. I don't remember entirely though. Good job though. :)