This is different.
I liked it. It flowed well.
Keep it up 5/5

Haha..:) I loved it...and i relate to it! I loovvee it :):) Okie...this is one of my fav poems of urs...:) maybe coz its soo cute and like care free...t shows your happy spirit! I loved it coz of that. The rhymes the context, everything was good!