U ripped my heart in 2

by Taz   Jun 25, 2007


You said you loved me, and i loved you,
you said you would never hurt me, but u tore me in two
i gave you my heart, and you ripped it apart
you told me i was the only one, but that was untrue right from the start
you were my world, now im lost
you were my every thing, now i have nothing
you took from the only thing that matters to me, now i have nothing to live for
u broke my heart

i know it sucks but its my first poem plz tell me what i can do to improve or just comment, i just wrote what i felt.

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