by reborn Jun 25, 2007
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
For the best reading result please read slowly and make a short pause after each sentence. |
Aww, it felt so vivid, and i swear I heard some waves while I was reading it! lol...really great poem, and so true...It rhymes perfectly...good job. :) |
by Nix
Very good poem. I like how you describe all beauty of nature. You have good wording, i really like these one. I am going to read more of yours later. 5/5 from me. |
Beautifully written poem, with truly wonderful imagery. You did great job on this one, it's very descriptive. 5/5 |