House Arrest

by PygmyPuff   Jun 25, 2007


Disco, Disco
Throw it through a hoop.
Sneak in, sneak out
an eggroll? yum.
2000 times,
write it fast
no time to break
to kiss.
I could use another hand massage.
Phonecall
damnit,
I hate you.
You don't mean that.
Run and hide,
ditch the evidence.
Sneak in, sneak out.
Shush.
whisper, don't speak!
2000 times
write it fast
no time to kiss
I love you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by A l y s s a

    Well, that was certainly a unique poem! It made me laugh. It was very hectic and upbeat. Although I'm not 100% positive what it was all about but I loved it. The flow was great and the mood was perfect. great write!

    Ally. x

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRapture03

    That was very differnet. i liked it tho. My only problem was it's length. I thought it could stand to be a bit longer. good job tho

  • 16 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Wow that was exotic =), Loved it made me smile, good flow keep it up = )

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    A hectic lifestyle can put one through all kinds of emotions. I like the way your poem shows the full range of human emotions.

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