A hectic lifestyle can put one through all kinds of emotions. I like the way your poem shows the full range of human emotions.

Wow that was exotic =), Loved it made me smile, good flow keep it up = )

That was very differnet. i liked it tho. My only problem was it's length. I thought it could stand to be a bit longer. good job tho

Well, that was certainly a unique poem! It made me laugh. It was very hectic and upbeat. Although I'm not 100% positive what it was all about but I loved it. The flow was great and the mood was perfect. great write!

Ally. x