I really liked this, it rhymed and flowed well, and I could feel the emotion in it.
Not sure it was in the right category though :P
But all in all, a good write, keep it up.

Love this poem, can really relate to your emotions. 5/5

It made me cry for the one I lost, but that's what the world's about I guess, some loosing some winning... excellent write, I can honestly say I enjoy every one of your pieces of work.