by Some guy done with college Jun 25, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
You've let me down for the last time |
That was amazing |
by Brenda
Eh, know this feeling all to well. this poem can can go in so many directions. but the style is so beautiful. great job in making this piece whatever the reader wanted it to be for them. keep up the good work! :] |
by meganmarie
Wow. deep. your writing is truly amazing. you always put such depth behind every word. this poem was just remarkable. |
by FiFiFairy
Short and innocently dark and sad. i like it |
I think you killed her!!! sorry that was a genius moment, the ending was good though. |