I'll Never Forget You

I really like ur poems u do a GREAT job putting them in a stroy type-poem ur a good writter keep up the work! 5/5 always
Kate~

You really cared for this girl didn't you, and you cannot take your mind off her, cause the changes keep going through your mind,, and asking yourself why she changed, am i right? private message me or comment one of mine, well bye

I think this will be a poem that a lot of people will relate to. You did a good job keeping it simple. No matter who reads it they'll be able to understand it. Instead of relating changing to some abstract object you just kept it real. Great job! :)
~Midnight Sun

I've only read a few of your poems but I like your writing style, how it's not really set to one specific way. It sounds almost lyrical. The way you use your words, sounds ljust like every day thoughts, which is good, because it makes it seem more real.

I think this one's a little off.
It's alright, but it's not emotional enough, in my opinion.
It's more like you're just saying it rather than really emphazing it. Like, you say what you're feeling, but you don't make the reader feel what you're feeling, and that's what makes a poem GREAT in my opinion.

Take care,
not-bulletproof.