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"It wasn't my fault our love ran out like a battery"
Great line ^.
I also liked the "emotionally rocked" thing, too.
Good poem, I can relate well.
We all learn lies get us nowhere.

Take care,
not-bulletproof

Wow very deep it was a very good poem
carly

This is really good too because it seems very raw...you know, heartfelt. Like you just wrote it as you felt it. That was a good way to go with this poem. Good job!
~Midnight Sun

It is amazing how much emotion you are able to get into your poems like that i am truly amazed you have a gift and there is no doubting that