Wow this is a very good poem i loved it i really did keep it up
carly

Wow that was really good.keep it up k?

Ah, you m'dear... have got knack for fast pace reading.
the flow of this made me create a certain tone for it. i enjoyed it. almost like humming a song in my head.
great image, word choice, vocabulary.
this all was just brilliant.

isaac
(ian)

Brilliant