by dollwithafrown Jun 29, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Wrinkles on his tender skin, |
by Melpomene
Such a sad poem you have portrayed here. Your word choice is simple yet so deep and effective bringing great emotions in this piece of poetry. I found the flow to be spot on with vivd imagery. Loved it alot keep up the good work. ~mel |