It's a nice poem. Create a clear vivid. ^^
Good choice of words too.
Keep up the good work. ^^

Amazing job
my favorite part was

I wasted away in tears
Regret upon regret
So many things
I wish I could forget

i could relate!
<3
love it!
xox Jess

Great poem! Not only is it easy to relate to but you can feel that sadness and hope you talked about, its very encouraging! I really enjoyed it! 5/5

This poem really demonsrates the power of poetry, and ageless inspiration..or should we say timeless? great theme for all ages 5/5

That was a hecka good poem.It has alot of meaning behind it and its VERY good.but at one point in the poem the rhyme was a little forced, but it still sounded good, 5/5

Wow that was a great poem...keep it up.

Very good writing. touching, specialy for people with problems. so i think everyone can really relate to this. Also this poem is what life is about there always will be new problems and new tears. I think the flow could have been better. But loved it overall!
5/5 keep it up!

I really liked this. i liked the line..."make a new a better past"...thats really interesting. good poem.

I thought this was really good. My fave part had to be...

Last year is gone
A slice of my past
So many things happened
Memories that weren't meant to last

I thought that rhymed and flowed really well.. I can feel the emotions in this as well.. Very good job. It came from the heart i can tell.. 5/5

Great poem dear, that was very greatly written... keep it up dear.

also, tnx 4 being my friend, i really appriciate it.

Your message was definitely encouraging!It is a really positive way to focus on how a year ends and how one must start all over again in a happy and hopeful mood, after all, the past is past.I loved the flow here, very nicely done.Anyway, keep writing this way!
Best wishes,
TILLmyLASTtearFALLS
Pst.Thanks a lot for commenting on my work.Really appreciated!

This is a sweet poem. I like how it gives out a message of hope. No matter what we've been through, we [can] overcome it, as long as we have faith in ourselves and carry on the best we can.

"But we even if it is a bumpy we must do the best we can" = take out that extra 'we' after 'But'. :)

Good poem.

Everybody has something about there past that they would love to change, but the reality is it's our past and all we can do is have a better future. Amazing poem and great flow 5/5 GG23

Simply written, but says exactly what a lot of people need to hear and understand . There are ghosts of the past that keep haunting us, and some people let them take over their lives -- while others understand that we must accept them and grow up .
Another nicely written piece .
..__MiNDYY

Hey!

This is such a great poem Ms.

I really do like this very much so...:D

This poem made me smile, it had this sort of hope in it that was really enlightening to any reader. the flow and rythm were also very good
5/5
gabriella

Another beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading all 3 of your poems. This one is my favorite. Flow was flawless throughout the poem. Well done.

Regret upon regret
^My favorite line

5/5!

Hey hell this was of course another great poem by you!!! Every word came from deep in your herat. 5/5 from me.