Comments : Hold over me

  • 17 years ago

    by LOVEmeNOT

    I like this poem. I think everything went in together perfectly. & i remember having feelings like this...which u expressed really good.
    So 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by KN

    Hey, thanks for the message :) ... I love this poem. You explained it so well. It seems like that's exactly how I feel. You're a great witer, keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Yhe offcourse your feelings are real. and nicely panned poem aswell. that was nice poem.
    you have talent
    keep it up great work

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Been there for sure. You put your emotions to words very well. This piece is definitely an emotional one. I related to these lines the most.

    but how can i open up
    when your the reason i cry

    and...

    but i know if i don't
    then i wont even feel your touch

    The last stanza summed up a lot of what i've been through. Trust me, it gets better but it takes a long time...least it did for me.
    Charisma*