Searching

by Liz   Jun 30, 2007


Searching searching searching
for a way out

searching searching searching
for some one who cares

a way out is easy
but the wrong one is
way to easy to do
and after u pick it
u can't go back

searching searching searching

some one who cares
why would someone care
they never did before
why start now

god will give u heaven
as a way out
because he cares

or

the devil will give u hell
as a way out
because he doesn't care about u
so pick carefully

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  • 17 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Well to be honest, heaven and hell is such a sterotypical answer for a way out....and besides, you don't know if he exsists for sure, so you cant choose carefully for u dont no the real answer, define searching? is it everything you say it is? I love this poem, but i defently think there is more information or ideas or clues to be included, to make it more filling and more convinsing.....
    It is on the way to great things...
    Nice work,
    Hidden
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Such a gripping start and finish to this wonderful poem!

    5/5 David

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