Such a gripping start and finish to this wonderful poem!

5/5 David

Well to be honest, heaven and hell is such a sterotypical answer for a way out....and besides, you don't know if he exsists for sure, so you cant choose carefully for u dont no the real answer, define searching? is it everything you say it is? I love this poem, but i defently think there is more information or ideas or clues to be included, to make it more filling and more convinsing.....
It is on the way to great things...
Nice work,
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