Exqusit Disaster

by Hilary Day   Jun 30, 2007


Look at her, isn't she beautiful
you see her across the room
how lovely she seems
lost in her own little world

She is beautiful
there is no denying that
but she drowns in her lost dreams
and the tears of a broken heart

You can't save her
she can't even save herself
why do you want to be her hero
what makes you think she wants your help

She becomes withdrawn and cold
a product of heart break
she's an exquisite master piece
designed for disaster

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  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    How no one has commented of voted on this one i will never know. you describe this girl so well. You sound like an artist drawing this girl through words. truely amazing. I see her. I feel i know her. I feel i am her.....well....once was her. Designed for disaster. A master piece presenting a heartache. A scar for every break i've encountered. But at the moment those scars are fading for i've found the one i love. He's my antidote. Amazing write. i am in love.
    ~*~Amber~*~
    thanks for the comment on mine. it means alot. stay posted for more

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