Feelings of Nothing

by Raychil   Jun 30, 2007


There is nothing
There is no heart
No being broken
Or tearing apart

There is no pain
There is no life
There is no comfort
There is no knife

Grey surrounds
Dark has fled
Light is shinning
But I still feel dead

My emotions have drifted
Into the air
I walk without feeling
I walk without care

Is this good?
Or is it bad?
Is it a dream?
Have I gone mad?

Is it better to feel pain
Than anything at all?
Is it better to stay still
Or just accept a fall?

There are no tears
Only a blank stare
There is no happiness
And I do not care...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Maddie

    This is remarkable. i have never felt nothing all by its self before and now i know what it's like. amazing!! keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Wow. This poem was lovely. You did a wonderful job of making the feeling of nothing seem so strong. Amazing poem.