by Artistic Fallen Angel Jun 30, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I look in the mirror and see a sad girl crying all alone at a table. Crying full of pain, so painful I want to look away but I can't. The girl sit there and it pains me just watching her. I blink and see that same girl lying in bed with hot tears still running down her rosy cheeks. Filled with so much pain and sadness. The image fades and I see the girl facing me still crying. I want to make her feel better. I reach out my hand and touch the cold surface of the mirror and I realize that girl is me, my own reflection. |
by Marc Ortiz
Well it was a good 'free verse poem' :) I have one suggestion though.. Try to put it into stanzas =) |
"touch the cold surface of the mirror" i love that line...and the whole lead into your reflection...very emotional and well written, great work! |