by ellewen Jun 30, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
If I were gone |
I thought the ending was perfect and it flowed well, but on how many lines you have that rhyme was intersting but it was still very good |
by Brittney
The last line was my favorite. Though the poem as a whole was amazing. Great write. Keep up the good work. |
by Nix
I like first and second stanza, but I don't like the third, it doesn't fit in the rest of the poem. |