I like first and second stanza, but I don't like the third, it doesn't fit in the rest of the poem.
I personally don't like poems which have rhymes, but this is a good one.
You have excellent choice of words through the poem and it's uniquely written.
4/5 (because of the last stanza)

The last line was my favorite. Though the poem as a whole was amazing. Great write. Keep up the good work.
*Brittney

I thought the ending was perfect and it flowed well, but on how many lines you have that rhyme was intersting but it was still very good