This was such a sweet piece, Truely beautiful I must say. The emotion was deep and written in great depth. One thing though capitalize your "I's" throughout the piece it will make the poem look much neater, only a minor problem which can be easily fixed. Good work. Keep them coming~mel

It was good, sweet and all. but it seems short and it seems like you had a bigger idea than just 8 lines, but still thats my opinion, great work though

I love this...though relatively short, you managed to put in so much depth and emotion.
Flow is good throughout and I love the message behind the words.

Short, sweet and to the point. a very cute and inpirational piece that brought tears to my eyes.
well done my friend
love Tara-Kay
xx

This poem seems unfinished to me. Don't get me wrong, it was still great, but i would've loved to read more of it.
Flawless flow =) which is a good thing of course.
This poem can reflect on so many people.

5/5