Love lust

by Finalgravedigger   Jun 30, 2007


Your words they curse
Saying I love you
is the worst.

Bleeding from the heart
every beat slowly
tears me apart.

Not able to think
I grow weak
this world was not meant for me.

This world of so called love
is dying into lust
there is no factor at heart.

I cannot stand because
all these people just wanna
have sex and dont want love.

(Plz vote and comment)

It just hurts too much
I cannot live because this
world just sucks.

Lust is slowly taking over
true feelings are pushed over
im sorry people just cant cant see
this lust factor that controls thee.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jeffreys Girl

    I completely understand what you mean. and im really excited to write this poem with you!
    x0x0
    amanda

  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Very nice topic to choose to write about ^_^ Your completely right in this one =p 5/5

    Thanks for the comment by the way =)
    Rhea, Dark Angel of The Night

  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    I like these stanzas the feeling here is mixed up, maybe some anger and pain...

    "Your words they curse
    Saying I love you
    is the worst.

    Bleeding from the heart
    every beat slowly
    tears me apart"

    Nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Tylor

    Wow.. very emotional.. good rhyming.. awesome choice of words.. awesome.. kinda on the sad side though.. but that doesnt matter.. 5/5
    -Tylor

  • 17 years ago

    by Perfectly Imperfect vaney

    Thats true...all of it. i loved your poem..especially cause it ment something...
    good job
    -vanessa

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