Sooooo freakin true!!!

Wow Loads Of EmOtion AND I LOVE IT !

Thats For My Message
I KnOw HOw YOuh Feel
5/5

Your poem is so true I don't really think the world understands the real meaning of love 5/5

I think you tried to hard to rhymn because some of the lines seemed like they were forced. The second to last line you have the word 'cant' twice. But other than those I enjoyed readin it. It has truth in it and these days people arent taking the word 'love' very seriously, they're just throwing it out there. Anyways well done on this. Keep it up!

I love it!

Thats true...all of it. i loved your poem..especially cause it ment something...
good job
-vanessa

Wow.. very emotional.. good rhyming.. awesome choice of words.. awesome.. kinda on the sad side though.. but that doesnt matter.. 5/5
-Tylor

I like these stanzas the feeling here is mixed up, maybe some anger and pain...

"Your words they curse
Saying I love you
is the worst.

Bleeding from the heart
every beat slowly
tears me apart"

Nice poem

Very nice topic to choose to write about ^_^ Your completely right in this one =p 5/5

Thanks for the comment by the way =)
Rhea, Dark Angel of The Night

I completely understand what you mean. and im really excited to write this poem with you!
x0x0
amanda