The changes

by gasping for air   Apr 23, 2004


There are so many ways ypu've changed me,
So many ways you've made me better.
There are big differences and important ones,
But then there are little unimportant ones too.

First you made me realize that not all guys are the same,
That you're different from the rest.
Then you taught me how to relax,
Slow down and take time to enjoy things.

You've prven to me time and time again,
That you're hre for me.
And that I'm important too,
It's not just about you.

There's little insignificant changes, Ones that are there but haven't affected me,
Like how my handwriting's starting to look like yours,
Only a little bit but the similarity's there.

Or there's the way I glow,
Whenever you make me happy.
And so many other things,
That I could take an eternity to name.

You've effected me like no one else,
And for that alone,
I'll keep you in my heart forever.

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  • 20 years ago

    by cookie

    oh yeah and you poem is very good!

  • 20 years ago

    by cookie

    hey amanda, i read your comment on my poem and i wanna say thanx,um lets see some pointers....um i really dont know just put all of your emotions in your writing make it like describe exactly how you feel inside dont leave any kind of feeling out,if your sad or hurt or mad just put it all together and see how it works thats what i do and thank you again for the comment

  • 20 years ago

    by gasping for air

    I appreciate the comments, im glad you guys think they're good, but aparently they're not 100 percent... so if you could explain why u aren't giving them fives then that'd be great!

  • 20 years ago

    by heather

    great poem i loved it keep writing you have a lot of talent

  • 20 years ago

    by gasping for air

    i used to think that my best poems were my sad depressing ones, but now I know that I'm pretty good at happy ones too, thanx guys for ur in put, and it may be asking too much, but could you possibly read my others and comment on those too, it'd help even more.... :) thanx Manda

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