Thats a boss poem, proper powerful like :)

I don't know what danii means but I can tell you now that this is a REALLY great poem. I love it. I hope you keep writing. The length, the style, the topic. It's all what I look for. 5/5 WOW.

Please vote.. tnx

Tnx vanilla pain.. just a little bit inspired...

Ok, it was good, but you seemed to change your rhyming patterns half way through and then you dont rhyme at all in one stanza, but when you were rhyming it was very great, it wasnt forced and it flowed brilliantly.You also could have worded the last line a little different so it flowed in with the rest of the poem, but all in all it was another great poem, 5/5

Beautiful poem.
In the beginning happy, when you write about the meeting and the happyness you share.
In the end, when it turned out so sad.
Wonderful written, a pleasure to read.
Take care
Hebe

N excellent poem..flow f da poem was perfect. i luv da last part..its sad and depressing cuz i dont like the idea f givin up on sumthin u rele want..lol 5/5
keep it up
tcs

Hey gurl! u write some pretty good stuff.....i lurve it!..lol keep it up!... =) 5/5

This is a good poem, I liked most of the rhyming and I could really feel the sadness you were expressing. So sad...

Sorry for it taking me so long to comment on your poem. But I'm here now. =)

Anyways, send me a private message or anything.

A shorT buT beautifuL piecE 5/5 brilliantlY penneD. keeP writinG!

A shorT buT beautifuL piecE 5/5 brilliantlY penneD. keeP writinG!

- Nazeer

This was a beutiful write i loved it i like how you told story well making it flwo nicyl into a poem!

OH itS a lovelY writinG...i prefeR mucH... thankS lol.....

luzaN

WonderfuL! excellenT! mE luV diS writinG. keeP uP yR gooDS worK..

goD blesS yoU....

>>>>>luzaN

Pretty good. you had sum emotions there.