by Kayla Jun 30, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I was once strong, |
by Fsams
Beautiful with the appropriate word choice and nice flow. You really captured my attention on this piece. Tc |
Another very good poem, i absolutely love how you made the ending rhyme like that, it captures the whole poem, again this is a perfect 5/5!!! flawless, keep it up!!! |